Redundant words
"He is a man who..." | He... |
"Owing to the fact that..." | Since... |
"...has been engaged in the study of..." | ...has studied... |
"It will be seen from a consideration of the data in Table 2 that..." | Table 2 shows... |
"At an earlier date..." | Previously,... |
"In the modern period of time,..." | Currently,... |
"It is interesting to note that..." | OMIT |
"Typical results are shown..." | OMIT |
"It has long been known..." | OMIT |
"(please see Figure One)" | (Figure 1) |
Avoid needless repetition
Of the many sounds that annoy me, the sound of someone needlessly sounding his horn annoys me most.